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Post johnnyjover09 Jul 2020, 19:04

Some personal work I've been working on. Love to hear your comments!

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Post Madva09 Jul 2020, 20:26

johnnyjover wrote:
09 Jul 2020, 19:04
Some personal work I've been working on. Love to hear your comments!

Like it!!! The mid break is clearly inspired from Resurrection though, ins't it? ;)
On a track like this personally I'd prefer some groovier drums, in particular on the second sections of each drop, and I'd try to make the main drop lead bounce a little more. But good job overall, keep up the good work :D
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Post johnnyjover10 Jul 2020, 08:37

@Madva thanks for the comments :)
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Post Frenchy03610 Jul 2020, 13:50

johnnyjover wrote:
09 Jul 2020, 19:04
Some personal work I've been working on. Love to hear your comments!

This is cool dude!

Break is very nice but a bit too similar to Resurrection for me.You might be able to change a note or two to fix this but not really a big deal.

Similar to what was said previously, I would try to find a way to vary your drops a bit more. While the main melody isn't bad, it definitely gets kind of stale when its only a bar long and the whole drop is leaning on it. Definitely add more elements in the background, more changeups on the melody, and some distinct first 8 vs second 8 elements to make the drop more interesting over time!
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Post johnnyjover11 Jul 2020, 23:22

Thanks dude i will keep all that in mind for the next one :)
Frenchy036 wrote:
10 Jul 2020, 13:50
johnnyjover wrote:
09 Jul 2020, 19:04
Some personal work I've been working on. Love to hear your comments!

This is cool dude!

Break is very nice but a bit too similar to Resurrection for me.You might be able to change a note or two to fix this but not really a big deal.

Similar to what was said previously, I would try to find a way to vary your drops a bit more. While the main melody isn't bad, it definitely gets kind of stale when its only a bar long and the whole drop is leaning on it. Definitely add more elements in the background, more changeups on the melody, and some distinct first 8 vs second 8 elements to make the drop more interesting over time!
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Post The Sound Of Now23 Aug 2020, 07:51

johnnyjover wrote:
09 Jul 2020, 19:04
Some personal work I've been working on. Love to hear your comments!


Nice bro , Love this